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Nobody knows
that depression is eating me alive
years of being sad
I've lost touch of my vibe
afraid of what people would think,
I stay inside my shell
I need my confidence
to fix myself

Help me
I'm losing myself
help me

Happiness has gone away
A song or poem I wrote.
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flowerplowedup Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
"I've lost touch of my vibe
afraid of what people would think,
I stay inside my shell
I need my confidence
to fix myself"

very relatable words; i wonder if i am depressed since i feel this way most of the time
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Supach Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I honestly admire people who admit they are suffering from depression, do they know just how much strength that takes and how strong they are for coping everyday with such  dark feelings. I think if you know what you are suffering from then that is half the battle, you can face dark days in a slightly better frame of mind knowing you are going to and will get through. Stay strong love power 
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PhotoArtMedia Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016
Very good.  Expressive.  I have been absent for some time ... life.  I am just getting back.  You do good work.  You may have never listened to this.  Listen, to the part that says something like. This is how life seems to me ... it is only therapy ... real expensive and no guarantee.  IMO is goes with the above.  See Dances with Wolves ~ You Move Me, Garth Brooks at www.youtube.com/watch?v=IASPJx…  
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Larathain Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2016
There can always be something bright if you take the time to tether the weather of night
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Hello Brie, this is beautifully written, just know you do not suffer alone. It is a constant fight to stay strong and never give up, no matter what. When you have your good days make the most of them and when you have the bad days, remember the good days.
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SingSongGal Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I will. Thank you so much.
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
You are most welcome! Here is a great big :hug: for you!
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SingSongGal Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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motherearth01 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Very welcome!
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Shining-Scribe Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Many people are eaten without anyone else knowing.
:tighthug: I hope these comments let you know that your depression won't eat you without a fight. There are people who care. 
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SingSongGal Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much.
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Mentalverse Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
hi brie, small steps are needed in a positive way, building up belief in you and hopefully one day striding, running, skipping, jumping and flying will follow. wish your all the best in your recovery - perseverance is key and finding your not alone in an illness which can be cruel. peace
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SingSongGal Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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ShardSharp2000 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2016  Student General Artist
A hug would do the best. Are you feeling any better?
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SingSongGal Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I'm okay. Thank you.
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SqueakySyrup Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Student General Artist
Are you okay? Can I help? :(
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SingSongGal Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I'm okay now. 
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SqueakySyrup Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Student General Artist
Alright. :huggle:
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